作者：北燕南飞 ‖ 文章来源于『雅思哥』
Topic sentence 主题句
Supporting sentence 支撑句
For example 举例
Concluding sentence 总结句
题目：The news media has become more influential in people’s lives, some people think it is a negative development, to what extent do you agree or disagree ？
主题句：It is undeniable that media coverage plays a crucial role in disseminating（传播） information and connecting the world to individuals. 支撑句：To be more specific, individuals are liable to（倾向于） make better-informed （更明智的）decisions when they gain access to a wide range of news covering aspects of their lives. 举例句：For example, a college graduate student is in urgent need of latest news about employment and career path.总结句： Therefore, news related to these items is more helpful to them than other social resources.
题目 Should old people stay at home or be placed in nursing homes?
The most important benefit is that professional doctors give intensive medical cares to aging people in retirement homes much more easily than those people at home. Besides, they can receive a proper diet prepared by dieticians to meet their individual requirements. This is especially good for those with auditory function disabilities. The greater flexibility of the regular medical check-ups allows for more chance to identify disease in its early stage. Importantly, their commonly held reports of physical examination can help distinguish them from other healthy people.
有没有感觉看着特别费劲？首先这一段主题句不突出，我读了很多遍才看出作者的意思是 It is beneficial for old people to spend time in nursing home. 其次，到底哪些方面有益呢？作者写的逻辑混乱。
按照我的理解，应该是 Firstly,staying at nursery home means getting access to professional care and nutritious food, which can not be acquired at home. 同学们可以就这一点举例。 后面再加一点，Secondly, frequent medical check-up and physical examination to prevent the occurrence of age-related disease is another advantage. 这个点不用举例了，一个段落两个点可以了。
第二次写作居然是产假（maternity leave) 的利与弊。紧张了几分钟之后，在考场上奋笔疾书。小作文还差最后一段， 十天后，成绩查到了，作文只有6.5。我非常难过，拿去复议，两个月后，邮箱收到邮件，复议成功，写作升高。成绩单上的6.5变成了7！
The line graphs display the quantities of goods transported in the Uk from 1974 to 2002 by road, water, rail and pipeline.
The most distinctive feature was seen in the category of road, in 1974, 70 million tonnes of goods were transported by road, after experiencing some fluctuations（起伏，波动）, the figure increased dramatically to 90 million tonnes in 1998 and increased minorly to 100 million tonnes in 2002.
接下来写在它下面的水运water, 也是增加， 数值稍微减小
A similar trend was seen in the category of water, although the initial number was 40 million tonnes from 1974 to 1978, it experienced a minorrise to 60 million tonnes in 1982 and reached 62 million tonnnes in 2002 after experiencing some fluctuations.
However, an inversely trend was seen in the category of rail,although it displayed an identical figure as the data of water between theyears of 1974 and 1978, it showed a decreasing trend and reached 41 milliontonnes in 2002.
Pipeline was the least important transport code even though itdisplayed a ring trend, it transported 5 million tonnes of goods in 1974andreached the peak at 20 million tonnes in 1995, then the figure leveled off atthe same data of 20 million tonnes till 2002.
In conclusion, it is evident that road was the dominant transportcode from 1974 and 2002 while pipe line was the least important one whichcarried the least amount of goods.
Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to school. what are the reasons, how can we solve this problem ?
原因Primarily, the rooted cause for this thorny issue is related to the learning pattern designed by many developing countries, such as China which just focus on the passive learning rather than interactive learning. This means that pupils have to spend too much time in class sitting still, listening toboring lectures or being tasted. 解决方案To transform this situation, great efforts and measures should betaken. For example, teachers should try their best to make classes interesting and lively to help learners learn efficiently and provide them enough opportunities to acquire knowledge via interacting with their peers and speakers. Besides, the students also should take part in extra-curricular activities and explore the interesting aspects of subjects actively rather than passively accept teachers’ orders.